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หน้าที่ 2 - ตัวอย่าง Essay : จดหมายแนะนำตัวเพื่อขอ Visa USA
September 8, 2003 The Embassy of the United States in Thailand Consular Section 95 Wireless Road Patumwan, Bangkok Dear Consular officer: I, Mr. xxxxx, am writing this letter for the purposes of providing personal background information and my reasons for pursuing further academic studies. This information is provided so that I may apply for a student visa in order to pursue further studies in the United States. I graduated in March 2, 2003 with bachelor degree in Arts, major in geography from xxx. After graduated, I looked forward to study in this xxxx especially in xxxx. Unfortunately, many xxx’s institutes in Thailand are lack of the tools and technology, which are necessary to get the information and solve the problems. Furthermore, there are a few numbers of xxx experts in Thailand. Accordingly, I plan to study abroad and the USA is my first choice. In addition, the numerous of xxxx technology is invented in the USA and the xxx in USA are famous in xxx branch. I do believe that my knowledge will gain up after I study in the USA. For my total expenses such as accommodation and tuition fee, Mr. xxx, my father, and Mrs. xxx, my mother, are my sponsors. My parent has a total current income about 25,000 baht per month from xxxx and xxx. (See enclosed bank statement and book banks). I am going to live at my grandmother’s apartment, Mrs. xxxx, to save my accommodation cost. It is located at xxxxx. We, my grandmother and I, are very close. She has supported me the tuition fee and the other expenses since I entered the university. Nowadays, we still keep contact all the time. I plan to study in the USA for three years - one year for a course in English for Second Language at xxxx to improve my speaking skill and to prepare for TOEFL test and two years for a Master Degree in xxxx. When I complete these two academic courses, I shall return to Thailand and work in either private sectors or public sectors to develop my home country. Most of all, I have to come back to take care of my father and my mother to show them respect. I guarantee that all the information I have provided in this letter is correct and true. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any additional documents. I am willing to answer any further questions or concerns. Please grant me the student visa for my brighter future. Yours faithfully, Mr. xxxx **************************************************** To whom it may concern, My name is XXX-XXX , the applicant for the United States VISA. The objective of this cover letter is to be the additional information besides other application materials. It explains my background and purpose of traveling to the United States. I earned Bachelor degree in Mechanical Engineering from XXX University in March 2000. After graduation, I worked as an engineer for almost 2 years and also have been preparing myself for studying in the United States by taking GMAT and TOEFL class at Kaplan Education Center. Presently, I have already completed TOEFL and GMAT tests respectively. The best scores are 250 (CBT) or 600 (PBT) for TOEFL and 550 for GMAT. To satisfy my desire for success, I must continue my education. The reason that I chose this country is not only because it is very well known in business field, the diversity of classes that U.S. universities offer and the teaching language in English are also the factors that influent my decision. Since the English language plays very important role in current international businesses, the opportunity to study in U.S. would give me new innovative ideas and strengthen my background for future career in this field. I am very excited about entering an MBA program that will allow me to focus on my interest in entrepreneur as well as provide me with the career possibilities and exposure to resources, such as networks and learning tools, which I do not currently have. At the Seattle University, I know that my investment of time, energy, and money will be well rewarded. At this point in my life, I believe I have great potential to gain much from a business degree since I have been exposed to the business environment for the past three years. I now posses a strong foundation to build upon and I am ready to assume the rigors and challenges of the Albers’s MBA program. I believe that the resources from the Seattle University will equip me to move beyond my innate abilities and allow me to succeed further in the world of business. After completing Master’s degree, I will return to Thailand to start my business career, as I want to contribute the new knowledge to my home country. Moreover, I am the only child and all of my family members are living in Thailand. It is my obligation that I have to return home to take care of them. For my total expenses such as food, accommodation, and tuition fee, Mrs. Tonglor Harinsut, my grandmother, is my sponsor. The reason that my surname is different from my grandmother’s is Harinsut is her old surname and she changed back after the death of my grandfather. From the very close grandson, as you can see from the enclosed picture that I went to Italy with her since I was a child, she asked for being the sponsor of my further education. Enclosed with this letter are the proofs of financial resources that will support me while I study in U.S. They are my own fixed account ( Baht) and my grandmother’s account (USD53,905.13). I assure that all the information stated in this letter is true and correct and I hope that this letter would be a good reference for the VISA approval decision. Thank you very much for your kind consideration. Sincerely Yours, **************************************************** (Date ) The Embassy of the United States in Thailand Consular Section 120/22 Wireless Road Bangkok, Thailand To Whom It May Concern : I, Miss ************, am writing this letter for the purposes of providing my personal background information and the reasons for continuing my study in US. This letter is provided so that I may apply for a US student visa. After graduated from ( ชื่อสถาบัน ) University in the faculty of ( ชี่อคณะ ) in 1997,I had been working with ( ชื่อที่ทำงานที่แรก ) for one year and one and a half year with ( ชื่อที่ทำงานที่สอง ) as ( ตำแหน่งงานที่ทำ ). Then I started to join the ( ที่ทำงานปัจจุบัน ) since June 2002 as assistant sales manager. My main job duties include making sales, marketing, co-ordinating with thai secretaries from the well- known companies. It is inevitable for my current position to deal with the overseas customers. Certainly, English is the main tool of the communication. Many times I found myself were on the miscommunication situations. This is a big problem in my career path. I consider that staying abroad and living with the native English speakers for a while would be a benefit. There are a number of reasons why I wish to pursue further study, those are; to improve my English, to expand my professional business skills, and to take a great opportunity with multi-cultural society. I choose USA for my further studying as I have heard so many good things about this country from my friends, who were once studying there. Their experiences shared with me make me feel accustomed to this place. So I have decided to apply for the Intensive English Language course at ( ชื่อมหาลัย ) University. I do believe that this way I can improve my English skill and be more confident to talk to foreigners without reluctance. For my all expenditures, including tuition fee, accommodation, food and all living expenses, will be under the responsibility of my father, Mr.*************, Managing Director of *****************. Upon completing the course, I shall come back to work with *************, which is currently running by my cousin, in the position of an Assistant International Marketing Manager. Now the business is in the process of expansion and will need someone reliable to take care of the marketing division. To tell the truth, I have to go back to take care my mother and my family in Thailand. I hereby certify that my above statements are accurate and true and I am willing to answer any further questions. Please do not hesitate to contact me should you require any additional documents. Sincerely yours, Miss ******************** Home Phone Number : ********* Mobile Phone Number : ************ Office Phone Number : ****** Ext. ****** Email : ที่ทำงาน ( ถ้ามี ) or ส่วนตัว ****************************************************



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